Calling Beta Readers for Broken Sight (Death & Visions Book 2)

With Book 1 now out in the world, I’m excited to share that Book 2 — Broken Sight — is officially ready for beta readers. This story has been simmering away behind the scenes, and now that the draft is complete, it’s time to bring in fresh eyes before final edits begin.

If you’ve been waiting to dive back into Edinburgh’s shadows, this is your chance to get an early look at what comes next.

What Is Broken Sight About?

Here’s the official blurb:

A Seer is dead. But no one saw it coming.
Six months after the Calamity Theatre case, I’m trying to keep my head down, do the job, and pretend Edinburgh’s shadows have stopped watching me. Then a Seer turns up dead, and Justice drags me back into the dark.
A Dreamer—one of Edinburgh’s rare Seers with Foresight—has been killed, and the Coalition moves fast to lock everything down. Justice pulls me in because they can’t get a clean read on the scene. No clarity. No usable Visions. Just fragments that don’t fit… and the creeping sense that someone has found a way to make the future go silent.
Justice wants answers without questions. The Coalition wants control without scrutiny. And I’m stuck in the middle, chasing leads no one wants written down. In a city where everyone’s hiding something—and some people can rewrite what you think you saw—I have to find the killer before the next body drops… even if the truth is the one thing I’m not allowed to say out loud.
In Edinburgh, the future is supposed to be written. This time, someone’s tearing out the pages.

If you enjoyed the mix of supernatural crime, politics, and messy humanity in Book 1, Broken Sight digs even deeper.

What I’m Looking For

Beta readers help shape the final version of the book by offering feedback on things like:

• Pacing
• Plot clarity
• Character arcs
• Worldbuilding consistency
• Moments that hit well… and moments that need tightening

You don’t need editing experience — just honesty, curiosity, and a love of stories.

Want to Join the Beta Team?

If you’d like to read Broken Sight early and share your thoughts, you can sign up here:

👉 https://storyoriginapp.com/reviewcopies/16318c2a-f6a0-11f0-86a0-7bfb6e966ea4

Spaces are limited, but everyone who signs up will receive the full details, timeline, and expectations.

Thank You

Whether you beta read, follow along, or simply enjoy the books when they release, your support means the world. This series exists because readers like you show up, get invested, and want more.

I can’t wait to share Broken Sight with you — and to hear what you think.